From 9361ebe4fdcb8a27468779bf36d6171bae549ecf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Steven Black <steveb@stevenblack.com>
Date: Mon, 2 Sep 2013 20:01:36 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Getting Started page: Simplified and focused the text of the
 'Disabling responsiveness' section.

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 getting-started.html | 24 ++++++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/getting-started.html b/getting-started.html
index e8c20e4984..6b85360c5f 100644
--- a/getting-started.html
+++ b/getting-started.html
@@ -269,20 +269,24 @@ bootstrap/
     <div class="page-header">
       <h1 id="disable-responsive">Disabling responsiveness</h1>
     </div>
-    <p class="lead">Don't want your site or application to be scaled on different devices? With a little bit of work, you can disable the responsive features of Bootstrap so that mobile users see your full desktop-version site. Read below or check out <a href="../examples/non-responsive/">the non-responsive example</a>.</p>
+    <p class="lead">Bootstrap automatically adapts your pages for various screen sizes.
+	Here's how to disable this feature so your page works like in <a href="../examples/non-responsive/">this non-responsive example</a>.</p>
 
-    <h3>Steps to disable responsive views</h3>
-    <p>To disable responsive features, follow these steps. See it in action in the modified template below.</p>
+    <h3>Steps to disable page responsiveness</h3>
     <ol>
-      <li>Remove (or just don't add) the viewport <code>&lt;meta&gt;</code> mentioned in <a href="../css/#overview-mobile">the CSS docs</a></li>
-      <li>Remove the <code>max-width</code> on the <code>.container</code> for all grid tiers with <code>max-width: none !important;</code> and set a regular width like <code>width: 970px;</code>. Be sure that this comes after the default Bootstrap CSS. You can optionally avoid the <code>!important</code> with media queries or some selector-fu.</li>
-      <li>If using navbars, undo all the navbar collapsing and expanding behavior (this is too much to show here, so peep the example).</li>
-      <li>For grid layouts, make use of <code>.col-xs-*</code> classes in addition to or in place of the medium/large ones. Don't worry, the extra-small device grid scales up to all resolutions, so you're set there.</li>
+      <li>Omit the viewport <code>&lt;meta&gt;</code> mentioned in <a href="../css/#overview-mobile">the CSS docs</a></li>
+      <li>Remove the <code>max-width</code> on the <code>.container</code> for all grids with <code>max-width: none !important;</code> and set a regular 
+          width, for example <code>width: 970px;</code>. Be sure that this comes after the default Bootstrap CSS. 
+          You can optionally avoid the <code>!important</code> with media queries or some selector-fu.</li>
+      <li>If using navbars, remove all navbar collapsing and expanding behavior.</li>
+      <li>For grid layouts, use <code>.col-xs-*</code> classes in addition to, or in place of, the medium/large ones. 
+	      Don't worry, the extra-small device grid scales to all resolutions.</li>
     </ol>
-    <p>You'll still need Respond.js for IE8 (since our media queries are still there and need to be picked up). This just disables the "mobile site" of Bootstrap.</p>
+    <p>You'll still need Respond.js for IE8 (since our media queries are still there and need to be processed). 
+	   This disables the "mobile site" aspects of Bootstrap.</p>
 
-    <h3>Bootstrap template with disabled responsive</h3>
-    <p>We've taken the above steps and applied them to an example. Read it's source code to see the specific changes called out.</p>
+    <h3>Bootstrap template with responsiveness disabled</h3>
+    <p>We've applied these steps to an example. Read its source code to see the specific changes implemented.</p>
     <p>
       <a href="../examples/non-responsive/" class="btn btn-primary">View non-responsive example</a>
     </p>