From c77bae308a689f6c38e0adec8acabd3ed4704e6a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mark Otto <otto@github.com>
Date: Mon, 19 Aug 2013 00:03:28 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] more copy edits

---
 getting-started.html | 25 ++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/getting-started.html b/getting-started.html
index 1bc23d339e..5fc05569cc 100644
--- a/getting-started.html
+++ b/getting-started.html
@@ -593,24 +593,19 @@ bootstrap/
 
 
     <h2 id="migration-notes">Additional notes</h2>
-    <p>We've made many underlying changes in v3 that are not immediately apparent without closer inspection. Base classes, key styles, and behaviors have been adjusted for flexibility and our mobile first approach.</p>
+    <p>We've made many underlying changes in v3 that are not immediately apparent. Base classes, key styles, and behaviors have been adjusted for flexibility and our mobile first approach.</p>
     <ul>
-      <li><code>.input-*</code> are 100% width. Wrap inputs inside <code>&lt;div class="col-*"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</code> to control input widths.</li>
-      <li><code>.badge</code> no longer has contextual (-success,-primary,etc..) classes</li>
-      <li><code>.btn</code> must also use <code>.btn-default</code> to get the "default" button</li>
-      <li><code>.container</code> and <code>.row</code> are now fluid (percentage-based)</li>
-      <li>Images are not responsive by default. Use <code>.img-responsive</code> for fluid <code>&lt;img&gt;</code> size</li>
-      <li>The icons, now <code>.glyphicon</code> are in a separate CSS file.</li>
-      <li>Include <code>.glyphicon</code> base class in all icons (e.g. <code>.glyphicon .glyphicon-asterisk</code>).</li>
+      <li>Text-based form controls are now 100% wide. Wrap inputs inside <code>&lt;div class="col-*"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</code> to control input widths.</li>
+      <li><code>.badge</code> no longer has contextual (-success,-primary,etc..) classes.</li>
+      <li><code>.btn</code> must also use <code>.btn-default</code> to get the "default" button.</li>
+      <li><code>.container</code> and <code>.row</code> are now fluid (percentage-based).</li>
+      <li>Images are no longer responsive by default. Use <code>.img-responsive</code> for fluid <code>&lt;img&gt;</code> size.</li>
+      <li>The icons, now <code>.glyphicon</code>, are now font based. They also require a base and icon class (e.g. <code>.glyphicon .glyphicon-asterisk</code>).</li>
       <li>Typeahead has been dropped, in favor of using <a href="http://twitter.github.io/typeahead.js/">Twitter Typeahead</a>.</li>
-      <li>Modal markup has changed <code>.modal-header</code> <code>.modal-body</code> <code>.modal-footer</code> now get wrapped in <code>.modal-content</code> and <code>.modal-dialog</code></li>
-      <li>Events are namespaced. For example, to handle the modal "show" event, use <code>'show.bs.modal'</code>. For tabs "shown" use <code>'shown.bs.tab'</code>, etc..</li>
+      <li>Modal markup has changed significantly. The <code>.modal-header</code>, <code>.modal-body</code>, and <code>.modal-footer</code> sections now get wrapped in <code>.modal-content</code> and <code>.modal-dialog</code> for improved mobile styling and behavior.</li>
+      <li>JavaScript events are namespaced. For example, to handle the modal "show" event, use <code>'show.bs.modal'</code>. For tabs "shown" use <code>'shown.bs.tab'</code>, etc..</li>
     </ul>
-
-     <div class="bs-callout bs-callout-info">
-       <h4>More Tools &amp; Examples</h4>
-       <p>You may also find this <a href="https://github.com/iatek/bootstrap-3-upgrade">upgrade tool</a> and collection of <a href="http://bootply.com/tagged/bootstrap-3">code snippets at Bootply</a> useful for migrating to Bootstrap 3.</p>
-     </div>
+    <p>For more information on upgrades and code snippets from the community check out <a href="http://bootply.com/">Bootply</a>.</p>
   </div>